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Build A Story
(2006-2007 School Year) - "Krazy" Story
"The Very Bad Hair
Day"
Once upon a time, in a
far away land, there was a
princess who had a bad hair day. (Amber R.) It was definitely a bad hair day --
she had bugs and glue in her
hair! (Mary S.) On top of that, her hair was all puffy (Taylor S.) and all different colors! (Leah N.) This was a
very bad day for the princess to have her bad hair day because today
she was getting married. (Joey N.) She was getting married to the most
handsome prince in the kingdom. (Austin B.)

(Picture by Karina K.)
The
princess took a shower and her hair was clean and straight. But when she brushed her hair, it
puffed up again! (Amber R.) She quickly called for help, but no
one came because they were too busy with the wedding preparations. (Mary S.) Next she
tried to put her head under the sink, but she smacked her head on the faucet and had to get an ice pack.
(Charles G.) The
princess started to cry, and the salt from her eyes took the puffiness
right out of her hair. But, now she had another problem.
(Mrs. B.) She noticed a dot on her face - then
another, and another. She began to scratch. She had the
Chicken Pox! (Angela H.) But her problems had just begun. Not
wanting to look at herself in the mirror any longer, she was backing
away when she tripped, fell out
the window and landed in the moat where the crocodiles lived. (Gabe S.)
Suddenly,
she saw a crocodile coming
straight toward her, so she started to swim as fast as she could.
When she glanced up, she saw something falling from the
castle window. (Gabrielle D.) It was her diary and it was falling
toward the alligator. (Austin B.) It hit him smack in the middle of the
head and knocked him out just as he was about to have the princess for
lunch. But wait! More things were flying from her
window. As she sat drenched on the bank of the moat, she saw some of her favorite pieces
of jewelry sparkling in the
sun as they fell to the ground. Somebody was rummaging through her
drawers! (Angela H.)
This was a very bad day!
(Taylor S.) This was supposed
to be one of the best days of her life. What more could go wrong?

(Picture by Angela H.)
At that very
second, a part of a
metal pipe came tumbling from her
window and hit her on the head. She fainted.
(Dallas E.) She didn't
know how long she had been knocked out, but when she finally started to
come to, she looked around groggily. She could not believe her
eyes! She didn't know how she got there, but she was in the church. (Nicholas M.) Her handsome prince was about to
marry someone else (and she looked just like the princess)!! (Mrs. B.) She got up and then she fell over
again. (Nicholas M.) What was going on? She had to stop
this! She got up and
ran. She had to stop the prince from marrying the fake.
(Charles G.)
Outside of the church, the
princess gathered some glue, bugs and a snip of her puffy hair and put
them in a bucket. She had a plan. (Danica F.) All of a sudden, as she began
to stir the contents of the bucket, she was being violently shaken.
It was her chamber maid, Lucinda, and she was shaking her
awake. She looked
around and realized that she
was lying in her
bed. (Anna K.)
Thank goodness, it was all just a dream!
She threw back her
covers and was about to get out of bed when she noticed a smudge of mud
and a small piece of seaweed hanging on the bottom of her
nightgown. The princess thought to
herself, "Wait a minute, maybe it wasn't a dream after all." (Karina K.) "What's happening to me?" she
cried out loud. The chamber maid just stared at her
blankly. The princess
looked down at herself one more time. (Veronica L.) It was not just a dream, it was a
nightmare! (Gabrielle D.)
Her chamber
maid leaned over her and
said "I'm sorry Rebecca, but the prince is marrying somebody
else." "I'm
very sorry," she said very happily. (Amber R.) Was her chamber maid part of the plot
to make sure that the princess wouldn't marry the handsome
prince? But why?? (Mrs. B.) The princess
had all kinds of thoughts streaming through her head and was so
confused, she decided to lay back down for a while to think things out.
(Karina K.)
"I need to get to the church!" the princess cried
out. As she tried to get up, the chamber maid pushed her back
down and snapped her fingers. Immediately, leather straps wound
up around her as if they were snakes, holding her securely in the
bed. "No, dear, you're much to ill to be running about," the maid
said in a sickeningly sweet voice. "Let me make you a nice cup of
tea," she added with a smirk. Then she went to the kitchen to make
her tea, but it didn't sound like she was just making tea. (Angela H.) As the maid was stirring the tea, she
added 1 drop of a secret potion to the mug. All of a sudden, the
tea was smoking and fizzing. (Karina K.) She came
back into the room with the fizzing mug on a silver platter.

(Picture by Angela H.)
"Now, drink this and everything will be fine," Lucinda said in a low
voice. "Why are you doing this?" the
princess choked out. "Well, isn't it obvious?" the maid responded
with an evil laugh. . .(Amber R.) "The prince didn't really want to
marry you; he wanted to marry your fine twin," (Angela H.)
she continued pointing to
herself. "You didn't even know you had a twin did you?" the maid
asked. "I used to
be beautiful like you until I drank this tea. I should be
marrying the prince. Not you!" screamed the maid. "Once you
drink this tea, I will become a princess and you will be an ugly
chamber maid. Then I will go to the church and marry the handsome
prince." (First Grade)
"You'll never
get away with this," cried Princess Rebecca. But as the princess said this the
chamber maid poured the tea down her throat. She began to feel
dizzy. (Angela H.) "I feel kind of dizzy," the princess said weakly, and the chamber maid replied, (Amber R.) "Good, it's working." (Angela H.) "Soon, I will
be you." (Amber R.) The princess couldn't keep her eyes open
any longer. While she slept, she turned into the maid, and the
maid turned into the princess. (Nicholas M.) When the princess woke up, she saw
the maid (who now looked
like her) dressed in her
clothes. (Dallas E.) She
looked down at her hand, but it did not look like her own hand anymore.
The princess said, "What
happened?". . .
(Dallas E.) "We
switched bodies silly little chamber maid," (Amber R.) said
her evil twin, the real chamber maid. The princess frowned at her maid, but
then she smiled. She had a plan. (Veronica L.) But her plan would
only work if one very important thing remained. (Karina K.) Her heart was pounding
as she slowly turned her hand over. She glanced down quickly so
her evil twin did not notice and she was relieved to see a heartshaped
birthmark where it had always been - on the knuckle between the third
and ring finger on her left hand. Not everything on their bodies
had changed. Now, if only the prince will notice.

(Picture by Karina K.)
"OK, you win,"
Princess Rebecca said sadly to Lucinda. "I knew I would win," said the
chamber maid gleefully. (Charles G.)
"But I didn't expect you to give
up so easily." (Karina K.) "Now give
me your engagement ring!"
(Gabrielle D.)
"This wedding is now going to continue, without a hitch," the chamber
maid said slyly, as she walked back towards the kitchen.
The
princess's plot was just beginning. (Angela H.) Before the wedding, the princess had
to work double time - there was a lot to do. (Veronica L.) First she had to find a way to get
unstrapped from her bed. (Angela H.) She had to be very
convincing for her plan to work.
"Lucinda, you
know that I have to be at the wedding too," exclaimed Princess
Rebecca. "You were going to be my maid of honor, and the prince
will think it is strange if my lifetime helper wasn't at my wedding,"
she continued. The princess held her breath as Lucinda stopped
and slowly turned around. It was easy to see that the chamber
maid was giving this some serious thought. Lucinda cast a glaring
look at the princess, and snapped her
fingers. The straps around the princess's wrists broke in half and fell away. (Veronica L.) "If you breathe one word of this to the prince," Lucinda
continued, "you will be very sorry." "I won't, I
won't!" cried Princess Rebecca. (Gabrielle D.) "Because if you do," the chamber maid said in a
soft, sweet voice, "little Princess
Rebecca will go bye-bye. (Karina K.)
You're history!" she contined. (Angela H.) "And, I might not only take care of you, but I'll get rid of
that father of ours also." (Veronica L.)
Princess Rebecca gasped. "You wouldn't. . ."
she stammered. "Oh yes I would," murmered Lucinda in that
sickening voice again. "I can't believe that all these years he
couldn't save me from the spell our stepmother put on me! Oh,
well. There's no time to get into that now. We need to get
to the church. So come along with me and keep your mouth shut!"
the chamber maid exclaimed as she headed toward the door.
Princess Rebecca walked along, her eyes looking down at the floor
as she quietly followed.
"Will I be able to eat
something?" the princess asked. "Yes, of course you will,"
Lucinda answered in a strange tone. (Danica F.)
"What a peculiar question, if I must say," she
continued. "But yes, we want this to appear as normal as
possible, so I guess that means you should be able to eat at my wedding
reception." What Lucinda didn't know was that Princess Rebecca was
remembering something her father had told her long ago -- "There is one thing that can break any spell," he had
said. "And that is the first bite
out of a fresh wedding cake!" (Danica F.)
When they got to the church, (Veronica L.) the princess saw her father (Mrs. B.) standing outside by
the front door. At his side, was Princess Rebecca's faithful and
loving dog, Captain. The
dog growled at Lucinda, who looked like the princess, and the King said "Captain, I'm surprised at you,
growling at your best friend!" Then the dog went up to Princess
Rebecca, who looked like the chamber maid, and licked her hand. The King
looked puzzled and said, "That's funny. I thought the royal dog
didn't really like you." (Veronica L.)
(Picture by Angela H.)
Princess
Rebecca was hopeful for a minute that maybe her father was catching
on. "Oh, well, it must just be the excitement and stress of this
big day," the King added. Disappointedly, the princess turned and
walked into the church with the chamber maid. Lucinda said, "Come
and help me put on my dress in the Bridal Room."
"I will, but I just need a drink of water first,"
answered Princess Rebecca. "Fine," Lucinda retorted
angrily. "But don't try anything funny. Remember my
warning!" Lucinda went down the hall to the Bridal Room.
Princess Rebecca didn't have much time. She started to look for the cake.
(Danica F.) She hoped she could find the cake
before it was too late! (Mrs. B.) Rebecca
snuck into the kitchen and there it was! (Veronica L.) She was just about to take a bite
when she heard a voice say "STOP!"
It was her father. (Angela H.)

(Picture by Veronica L.)
"What
are you doing?" asked the King.
(Charles G., Amber R., Danica F.) "That cake can't be eaten until the
princess takes a bite." (Dallas E.) The princess stopped. She thought
very carefully. She
turned around to her father and said (Angela H.) "I am the real princess." (Gabe S.) "Father, I am Rebecca. I am doing what you told
me to do to lift the spell." (Nicholas M.)
Just as she said this,
Lucinda burst into the room, grabbed the princess and shoved her toward
the door! "What nonsense is she babbling on about?" she demanded
of the King. Then to Rebecca she snapped, "You know you are not the real
princess!" (Nicholas M.) "She was just telling me what a beautiful princess you are
and what a beautiful bride you will make," said the King, winking at Rebecca.
(Danica F.) Rebecca
gasped. "Does he know that I am the princess?" she thought
to herself. (Veronica L.)
"Yes, you must've misunderstood what I was saying," said Rebecca, whose face was now red as a tomato.
(Karina K.) Rebecca then winked back at the king.
(Nicholas M.)
For one brief
second, dead silence
fell in the room. (Karina K.) A knock at the door broke the
silence. The next voice they heard was the Prince's as he poked
his head through the door, "Are you ladies almost ready in there?
Everyone is waiting in the church." Lucinda was distracted for
one moment as she shrieked to the Prince, "You are not supposed to see
the bride before the ceremony!"
Princess Rebecca
took advantage of this moment that Lucinda was distracted. She
turned quickly and ran towards the cake. As she did this her shoe
caught the corner of Lucinda's gown and she tripped. She flew
through the air towards the table that the cake sat on. For a
moment, it was as if everything was happening in slow motion.
Then she landed head first into
the cake (Angela H.)
with a SPLAT (Amber R.) that even the guests in the church heard!
(Picture by Angela H.)
(Gabrielle D.)
Green sparks exploded over
Rebecca
and Lucinda and for one second, all anyone could see was green
light. Then everything
happened fast. (Charles G.) Lucinda, who had
fallen to the floor, got up and turned toward the door. The
prince who was now peeking in to see all the commotion, gasped because
Lucinda no longer looked like the princess. She once again looked
like Lucinda, the chamber maid. Princess Rebecca, who now looked
like herself again, looked up at the prince and through a cake-filled
smile said, "Now we can finally be married!"
The King made sure Lucinda was taken away to be
locked in the dungeon. He explained to Rebecca that Lucinda had
been lying. She really wasn't her twin sister. She was just
an evil chamber maid that was quite an expert at magic spells. He
assured the princess that he would make sure she was stripped of these
magic powers, so that she could never interfere again.
"How did you know it was me?" Rebecca asked
her father. He replied, "I began to put things together. To
start with, your faithful dog Captain gave me the first clue when he
licked your hand and growled at Lucinda. And no one else would've
known the way I told you to break any spell. Lastly, I saw the
heart shaped birthmark on your hand, which is definitely one of a
kind! Then I knew for sure you were my little girl."
Princess Rebecca managed to wipe most of
the cake off of her face and her dress. She couldn't, however, get all of the
cake out of her hair. This truly was a bad hair day! And as
she came down the aisle to meet her handsome prince and be married, she
really didn't care.
(Picture by Angela H.)
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