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2007 - 2009
Secrets in the Closet



    Moving to a new town is always a difficult thing.  Moving to a new school can be even more difficult.  But moving to a new school when you are a little bit different from everyone else can be the hardest thing you ever have to do.  Jackie Evans is a little bit different.  You see, she is handicapped and restricted to a wheelchair, so she can't run and play like all the other kids.  (Karina K.) By itself this wasn't so bad.  Jackie was beginning the 5th grade, so she was pretty well adjusted to living her life in a wheelchair.   What she never quite got used to was all the sympathetic looks and stares from all the other children and even the parents sometimes.  Jackie was a confident, strong willed girl who didn't feel as if being in a wheelchair limited her as much as most people thought.  While she was not able to do much like play basketball, (Mary S.) she was able to do most of the other things that girls her age could do.  In addition, Jackie Evans really liked to write, and she was very good at it. (Sarah N.)
    The minivan pulled slowly up to the front of the school.  "Would you like me to come in with you?" Jackie's mother asked with concern.  "No, it's OK." (Angela H.)  "I think I'm going to be alright, Mom," Jackie stated.  (Karina K.)  She shifted herself into her wheelchair, grabbed her book bag from the front seat, and wheeled herself toward the front door of the school. 
    She struggled for just a second as she made her way up the ramp, and she was very glad another girl was there to help her with the door.  As Jackie entered the school, she noticed that no one was there.  She wondered what was going on.  (Karina K.)  The school was a bit dark, (Maria B.) but she noticed a light in one of the classrooms.  She wheeled over and knocked on the door.  (Angela H.)  She hated to admit to herself that she had a feeling of uncertainty in the pit of her stomach.  "Hello?" (Angela H.) she called out timidly.  No one was there.  She headed back to the main lobby.  "Hello?" she called out again.  An old man with a very low pitched voice rose up from behind the information counter and said, "What are you doing here?" (Karina K.)


(Picture by (Karina K.))

It was then that she noticed the calendar hanging on the wall behind him.  (Angela H.)  "I thought today was the first day of school, but I guess I'm a day early," Jackie stammered.   "It's good that you're so anxious," the old man chuckled.  Jackie, who was very embarrassed, wheeled away with a bit of a frown on her face.  What was she going to do now that her mom was already gone? (Karina K.) 
    "You should call your mom," the old man called after her as he held out the phone receiver for her.  "What's her number?"          "It's 555-9581," said Jackie.  He dialed and handed her the phone.  "Mom, can you come and pick me up?  (Adam G.) We're a day early, " Jackie explained to her mom.  There was a moment of silence as she listened to her mom.  "So, not for about two hours, huh?" Jackie replied.  "OK, I'll see you then."
    "So you have a couple of hours to kill, huh?" the man questioned.
    Jackie replied "Yea," as she looked around the lobby.  She noticed a girl working on a puzzle in the corner.  It was the girl who had held the door open for her.  She wheeled over and asked her why she was at school.  "I'm here because my grandpa is here," the girl replied. "Why are you here?" the girl asked Jackie. (Mary Jo L.)  Jackie told her what had happened. (Hunter D.)  Jackie introduced herself and found out that the girl's name was Cindy. "So now, you have time to get to know the school a little better," Cindy stated.  "You're right.  Can you show me the fifth grade classroom please?" Jackie requested.  "Why sure Jackie.  Just let me get the keys from my grandpa."  Cindy answered.  (Roy S.)


(Picture Created By: Angela H.)

    "Who is your grandpa?" Jackie questioned as she tilted her head in the direction of the man behind the counter.  "Can you keep a secret?" Cindy asked quietly.  "Yea.  Why?" Jackie whispered back.  "Because he's . . ." Cindy continued. (Angela H.) "He's what?" asked Jackie.  "Um. . . he's, he's just new to the school, and that's why he's here. . .to get ready.  Yeah, that's right," she said in a strange voice. (Karina K.).  "What does he do here?" Jackie asked.  "And why is any of this a secret?" she continued.  "Oh, he's the janitor of the school," (2nd Grade) Cindy answered.  "And he's,"  Brrring!!!  The bell drowned out what she said next.  "What?" Jackie exclaimed.  "Those darn bells," (Angela H.) Cindy's grandpa said as they came up to the counter.  "They scare me half to death every time they go off!" he said, snickering.  "Grandpa, can I have the key to show Jackie the fifth grade classroom?" Cindy asked.
    As they walked down to the fifth grade classroom, Cindy whispered something into Jackie's ear. (Angela H.)  Jackie thought she heard her say, "See that closet door over there?" as she pointed to a door at the end of the hallway.  "Yeah," Jackie replied.  "Don't ever go in there," Cindy said anxiously.  "Why not?" Jackie asked.  (Angela H.)  "People think it's haunted!" (Danica F.) Cindy answered. "Why do they think that?" Jackie prodded.  Just as Cindy was about to answer, a light shone from under the closet door.  (Maria B.)  Both girls screamed and quickly went into the fifth grade classroom, Jackie's wheelchair scraping the doorway as they hurried through.


(Picture Created By: Adam Hastings)
(Keep watching the picture.  It moves and changes)

Since Jackie had tried to come through the door at an angle, one of her wheels caught on the edge of the door and she was stuck in the doorway!  (Amber R.)  She jerked forward, hoping it would slide through, but no luck.  Cindy ran to the far side of the classroom.  When she looked back, she noticed her new friend Jackie was missing! (Gabrielle D.)  Cindy loudly shrieked Jackie's name and startled her grandfather back in the office.  He ran to the doorway (Karina K.) tripped on the edge of Jackie's wheelchair, and fell to the floor(Dallas E.)  At that moment, the light in the closet went off!  Jackie wasn't so sure she liked this school so far. (Angela H.)  She reached down and helped Cindy's grandpa get up off the floor.  (Gabrielle D.)   
       "What in the world were you girls screaming for?" Cindy's grandpa asked.  "We saw a light go on in the closet," Jackie replied.  "That's nonsense," the grandpa said with an irritated tone.  "That's just a janitor's supply closet.  You girls have great imaginations," he added.  Jackie was beginning to wonder, "When will my mom come?" She just didn't like the strange feeling she had. (Karina K.)  "Now let's get you through this door so you can see your classroom," the grandpa said as he pushed her wheelchair into the fifth grade classroom.  Jackie was glad to join her new friend, Cindy.  Cindy's grandpa returned to the front office and left the girls to look over the classroom. 
    The classroom was bright and cheery, and filled with all the usual things you'd find in a classroom.  There was nothing out of the ordinary here, except for one thing.   A number of the desks were broken. 
(Charles G.)
  They leaned kind of lopsided in one direction or the other.  Jackie pointed to them with a questioning look on her face when Cindy responded, "Oh, my grandpa will be fixing those before school starts tomorrow." (Dallas E. and Mrs. B.)  Then she continued as she pointed to one in the corner, "It looks like this one will be yours.  At least it has the name Jackie on it." (Angela H.)
    Jackie was just wheeling over to examine her desk when she heard a familiar voice coming from the doorway.  "Ready to go back home?" her mom asked cheerfully.  "Yes, I'm ready to go home mom," Jackie answered.
(Gabrielle D.)  "I have so much to tell you already!"  Jackie waved goodbye to her new friend Cindy as they turned and headed back toward the front door.
    The next morning, on the real first day of school, things appeared more normal when Jackie's mom dropped her off.  There were kids going into the school from all directions, carrying their bookbags and lunches.  Jackie turned her head and yelled, "Thanks for the ride, mom!" as she wheeled herself toward the ramp.  When she reached the front lobby, she noticed Cindy talking with some friends and decided to go over and say, "Hi." (Karina K.)  Cindy introduced her to some of her friends.  "This is Julie, Kathy, and Mindy," Cindy told Jackie.  Then to the girls she said, "This is my new friend, Jackie.  We met yesterday."  One of the girls just started to ask what Jackie was doing at the school yesterday, when Jackie felt someone pulling on the handles of her wheelchair. (Amber R.)
    "So do you think you can find your way around OK today?" Cindy's grandpa asked Jackie as he turned her wheelchair around.  "Yes, I think I'll be fine, thanks," she answered.  "You'd better get on to class to beat the rush," the grandpa recommended.  As Jackie wheeled down the corridor, she heard girls giggling and whispering something about a wheelchair. (Veronica L. and Amber R.)  Sadly, she continued down the hall.  This was nothing different.  She was used to this.  As she wheeled down the hallway, she began to notice and wonder why so many of the school walls were painted black. (Gabrielle D.) When she had almost reached her classroom, her wheelchair suddenly got stuck on something on the floor. (Gabe S.)

(Picture by Gabrielle D.)

  Jackie was stuck in a big wad of gum. (Mrs. B.)  When she looked in the classroom she saw some of the children laughing at her. (Gabrielle D.)  One girl asked, "You stuck?" and started giggling again. (Veronica L.)  Just then, the morning rush to classes began.  Children came running down the hall. (Charles G.)  "Oh, this is just great!" thought Jackie.  "What a way to start my first day of school."  Then, before she could even try to get her wheelchair free from the gum, the bell rang. (Charles G.)  Somebody shouted, "Here comes the teacher! Get in your seats!" (Angela H.)  A tall, handsome man with a warm smile came down the hall toward her and said "Looks like you could use a hand!"  He bent down and used a tissue to remove the wad of gum.  Then he pushed her through the doorway and into her classroom.  "If I remember right, your seat is right over here," he said as he positioned her perfectly at her desk.  "Thank you Mr., you are very kind," said Jackie.  (Amber R.)  "You can call me Mr. Jackson, and I am your new teacher," answered the smiling man.  "Hello class," he continued as he walked to the front of the room.  "Welcome to the 5th grade!" he continued. (Karina K.)  "Do any of you know who dropped that wad of gum in the hallway?" (Amber R.)  "We're all going to have to be a little more careful for Jackie's sake."  Jackie raised her hand and said, (Angela H.) "Please don't feel like you have to change anything for ME!!" (Mrs. B.)  She continued, "Um, I'd really just like to know e-everyone's name here." (Karina K.)


(Picture by Dallas E.)

"OK, Jackie.  That's a great idea - seeing as I need to learn most of the names here myself," Mr. Jackson replied.  The day continued as any other first day of school and before Jackie knew it, it was lunch time.  She found her way into the lunchroom hoping to spot Cindy, but she could not see her anywhere. (Angela H.)  She wondered where she was. (Lindsey P.)  "Do you know where Cindy is?" Jackie asked the girl next to her, a little scared when she saw the looks of some of her classmates.  (Kate B.)  The girl barely nodded, so she got her lunch (Zachary N. and Nate G.), and, balancing it on her lap, she wheeled up to a table to eat alone.
    It was then that she finally caught a glimpse of Cindy, standing in one of the doorways, talking to her grandpa. (Lauren K.)  Jackie thought they almost looked as if they were arguing about something.  When Cindy turned to come in to the lunchroom, Jackie waved her hand in the air, hoping she would see her.  Cindy smiled and started to walk in her direction.  "There you are, I was looking for you," Cindy said loudly, so she could be heard above all the noise in the lunchroom. (Katey N.)  "So Jackie, how is school so far?" she continued.  "It's fine," Jackie said.  "I just wish people could forget that I'm in a wheelchair and treat me like a normal kid." (Sarah N.)  Then Jackie asked, "Were you just fighting with your grandpa?"  "Well sort of," answered Cindy. (Zachary N.)  "I get so mad sometimes." (Valerie N.)  "He was upset that I got to class late today."  "Why were you late?" asked Jackie.  Cindy hesitated, then said, "Well," (Karina K.)  "I was just looking in that closet I told you about, and . . ." ( Kelsey P.)  "And what??" Jackie shouted.  "Shhh, I don't want everybody to hear!" Cindy whispered.  I thought I had enough time before class, so I went inside the closet, but it was pitch dark. 
(Angela H.)  I was reaching to find my way around, when I found a secret doorway!  (Hunter D.)  I was about to open it, when I heard the bell ring, so I ran out of there to my classroom. 
    "Wow, you were very brave to go in there since people say it's haunted!  Where do you suppose the door leads to?" Jackie asked.  "I don't know, but I'd really like to find out," Cindy responded. (Joey N. and Karina K.)  "Maybe it leads to a secret hideaway," Cindy continued.  (Mary S.)  "Let's stay after school and sneak in there again to check it out!"  Jackie exclaimed. (Karina K.)  "Are you sure you won't be too scared?" Cindy asked.  "What are you talking about, I'm never scared!" Jackie answered a little defiantly. (Joey N.) Then she softly added, "I think I'll be okay as long as you're with me."
(Katey N.)
    "Alright, I'll meet you back here after the school empties out," (Karina K.) Cindy stated as she turned and rushed out of the lunch room.
    Jackie went back to her class where she anxiously awaited the end of the school day. (Mary S.)  The time ticked by slowly until the bell finally rang.  Jackie waited until the halls were free of people before she went into the lunch room to meet Cindy. (Angela H.)  She waited and waited.  Cindy never came.  (Maria B.) "Where could she be?" Jackie said to herself. (Karina K.)  She had just decided to check the hallways when she heard a scream. (Angela H.) Jackie was startled and set out to find where the scream came from. (Lindsay S.)  But before she could exit the lunchroom, she heard the shatter of glass.  Jackie was very scared and didn't know what to do. (Karina K.)  She really hoped nothing had happened to Cindy.  Terrified, Jackie began to yell for Cindy.  After several tries, there was still no response. (Karina K.)  So she began to wheel herself around the school to look for her.  She went back to the classroom - no Cindy.  Next, the library - no Cindy.  Where could she be?  Jackie thought she ought to try the office next. (Lauren K.)  She rounded the corner and started down the hall toward the office in the front of the school.  It was a little creepy being in the empty school.  When she had almost reached the front lobby, she suddenly saw a shadowy figure race out the door. (Mary S.)  "Wait!" she cried out after the figure.  But before she could go any further, she heard the mysterious scream again. (Sarah N.)
    This was really starting to get spooky! (Karina K.)  Jackie started toward where the scream had come from. (Sarah N.)  She decided to look in the bathroom, (Joey N.) but when she opened the door, the power flickered on and off. (Zachary N.)  For a moment she couldn't see anything and then, much to her horror, she saw Cindy lying on the floor. (Joey N.)  She gasped for a breath but was in too much shock to find any.  She was paralyzed in the doorway unable to think, breathe, or move.  (Mary S.)  She blinked again, hoping she was just imagining something.  Unfortunately, she wasn't. (Karina K.)  "Cindy! Are you OK?" shrieked Jackie. (Sarah N.)  Cindy didn't make a sound.  She just laid there looking as if she had been frozen.  (Mary S.)  This was when Jackie first noticed the shards of glass all over the floor.  She looked up and saw that the mirror had been broken to pieces.  (Angela H.)  When she looked back at Cindy, she was relieved to see some movement.  (Karina K.) Cindy's eyes were slowly opening and then closing again.
    "Are you OK?  What happened to you?" (Karina K.) Jackie asked excitedly.   Cindy slowly began to hoist herself up.  "Who did this to you?" asked Jackie.  (Karina K.)  Cindy tried to answer, but couldn't.  She began to cough. (Mary S.) Then, after sitting up and looking around for a few seconds, she cleared her throat.  (Karina K.)  "ARE YOU OK?" Jackie said louder.  (Lauren K.)  "I'm fine," Cindy answered shakily.  "Just a little shaken." 
    "What happened?" Jackie questioned again.  "I heard you scream twice."  "It's kind of silly, really," Cindy began.  "I was washing my hands when I noticed that the mirror was coming loose.  When I saw it was actually coming off of the wall, I screamed, and then it came down so fast, I must've screamed again as it hit me and I fell to the floor."  "The next thing I knew you were looking over me and asking if I was OK," Cindy finished.
    "You're lucky you didn't get cut at all - that was a huge, heavy mirror!" Jackie said.  Just then both girls looked up at the large expanse of wall where the mirror had hung over the sinks.  Almost at once they both pointed to a large square that appeared to be cut into the wall at the far end of the room.  The strangest part of this hole in the wall was that light was pouring through it from the other side.  They were just going to make their way carefully over to examine this finding when the bathroom door burst open and Cindy's grandpa came running in saying, "Are you girls OK?  I heard a scream and came runnning!" (Sarah N.)  "We're fine, Grandpa," Cindy answered.  "Just a bit shaken up."  "I was afraid that was going to happen," Cindy's grandpa said as he looked at the glass all over the floor.  "Sorry, I didn't get that mirror fixed soon enough."  "It's OK," Cindy replied.  "At least no one was hurt."  Then Cindy pointed to the square-shaped hole in the wall and asked, "Grandpa, see the light coming through there?  Do you know what is behind this wall?"  "Oh, that's just the janitor's closet behind there," he answered rather quickly.  "Let's get you out of here and on your way home so that I can get this cleaned up," he continued as he rushed them out of the bathroom. 
    That night after supper, Cindy and Jackie got together at Jackie's house to talk.  Jackie asked Cindy, "You know the janitor's closet that your grandpa said was behind the bathroom?  Is that the same closet that everyone thinks is haunted?"  "Yea, that's the one," Cindy replied.  She continued, "Maybe it is haunted!  Although, I don't really believe in that kind of thing.  I don't know, but if you're up to it I know a way to find out!" (Mary S.)  "All right, let me in on your plan," Jackie begged.  The girls plotted for almost an hour about how they would check out the closet the next day at school, and the next thing they knew, Jackie's Mom was calling down the hallway that it was time to take Cindy home.    Before she left, Cindy said, "In all the excitement, I forgot to ask you if you were planning to enter the writing contest we heard about at school?"  Jackie answered, "Yea, I want to.  I really love to write.  I need a good story though." (Mary S.)  "Oh my gosh, I just thought of a grand idea!" Cindy exclaimed.  "You could write about the haunted closet!"  (Sarah N.)  "But, it's supposed to be a true story," Jackie said.  "Right now, all we have is speculation about the closet, nothing real."  Cindy turned as she was leaving Jackie's room and said, "Maybe that will all change tomorrow!  See ya!"


(Picture by Sarah N.)

    When she went to school the next day, Jackie was looking all over for Cindy.  (Lindsey P.)  When she couldn't find her, she wheeled herself into the bathroom where they had left such a mess yesterday.  Much to her amazement, she found that the room had not only been cleaned up, but the mirror had also been fixed so that you wouldn't even know anything had happened.  She left the bathroom and saw Cindy down the hall a bit.  As she wheeled toward her, she noticed a couple of girls give her sympathetic looks.  Many of the students still weren't used to seeing another student in a wheelchair.  Jackie hated that. 
    "Hi," Cindy called as she saw Jackie.  "You ready?" she continued.  "I guess," Jackie answered.  Together they made their way to the mysterious closet and opened the door.  They immediately regretted it. (Lindsey P.)  The closet was dark, spooky, and to one side of the closet was a small door that stood open a bit.  Through it looked like a long tunnel. (Mary S.)  Suddenly both girls were blinded by a bright light.  "What are you girls doing?" asked Cindy's grandfather, who had come up behind them.  (Sarah N.)  "Oh Grandpa, we were just, um". . . said Cindy.  (Leah N.)  "We're just looking," answered Jackie shyly. (Mary S.)  Suddenly the school bell rang and all the children were rushing through the hallway.  Cindy's grandfather quickly shut the door.  (Sarah N.)  "You had better get to your classes," the grandpa muttered.  So the girls left, giving eachother a frustrated look as they entered the classroom.
    The day went on as usual, except that in the afternoon, Mr. Jackson gave the students an extra hour to work on their entries for the writing contest, or homework if they weren't planning to enter.  Jackie was so busy writing about the "secret closet," that the hour flew by and before she knew it, the end of day bell was ringing.  At their lockers, she and Cindy plotted to check out the closet one more time after the other students cleared away.  They went and waited in the bathroom, until the hallways were clear.  It took a while, but once the school cleared out, the girls snuck out and went to the mysterious doorway again.  (Mary S.) 
    "Hopefully your grandfather won't spot us this time," whispered Jackie. (Sarah N.)  Then they quickly scrambled inside before anyone could see. (Leah N.)  For one brief moment, Jackie's wheelchair caught on the doorframe and she thought she wasn't going to fit.  But then it let loose and her wheelchair charged in through the doorway a little too fast.  "Ouch," Cindy cried as the wheelchair knocked into her.  "Sorry," replied Jackie.  Before they closed the door (which actually surprised them that there was this much room in a closet) they managed to find the light switch and flip it on.  At first it looked like anyone would expect a janitor's supply closet to look with mops and pails and cleaning supplies lined up.  In one corner they spotted a paintbrush still wet with paint on the floor. (Karina Klotz) Then Jackie pointed to another corner of the large closet and said, "Look over there!"  Cindy turned and saw what she was pointing to.  There on the floor was a long trail of paint footprints that led to another door, a much smaller door.  (Leah Nasgowitz)  Both girls looked at eachother in astonishment.  "Wow, this closet is much bigger than anyone would ever know!" Cindy exclaimed.  The girls pressed on forward till they reached the small door.  Jackie said, "You'll have to go on without me.  My wheelchair will never fit through.  I'll wait right here and you can just tell me what you see." 


(Picture by Angela Hastings)

    Cindy opened the door, and stepped inside.  The door closed behind her and she stood in pitch darkness.  She had no idea where she was and she couldn't find the door again in the dark. (Rachel Scaduto)  She desperately felt around for the door,
(Eric Papenthien) but instead she felt a lightswitch.  When she flicked it to the on position, nothing happened.  "Hey, I have my flashlight in my jacket pocket," said Cindy out loud.  She turned it on and she filled the room with a beam of light.  (Leah Nasgowitz) That's when she saw a huge bookshelf filled with hundreds of big, dusty, books. (Eric Papenthien)  She flashed the light around a bit more and saw what looked like a crumpled blanket and pillow in the corner.  Next to that was a floor lamp.  "What is going on in here?" Cindy whispered out loud.  She was just about to switch the lamp on and take a closer look at the books on the shelf when she heard frantic pounding on the door.  She could hear the panic in Jackie's voice as she exclaimed, "Someone's coming!"   "Hurry, I think it's your grandpa!" Jackie continued. (Leah Nasgowitz)  Cindy spotted the door with the flashlight beam and just as she was opening the door, she dropped the light and as it hit the floor, it went out.  She rushed through the door back to Jackie, promising herself to come back and get the light again later. (Mary Spieckerman)  "Shhh," Cindy said as she motioned to Jackie to move to the side of the closet.  They quickly turned the light off in the front part of the closet and squeezed themselves over to the side so that they would be behind the door when it opened.  Jackie just barely got her wheelchair over when the door opened quickly and someone entered the dark closet.  It looked like Cindy's grandpa, and he must not have suspected they were there because he never turned the light on.  He walked directly across to the second door, quickly went through and closed the door behind him. 
    The girls tried really hard not to make a sound as they quickly exited the closet. (Madisen Donovan)  "What was behind the other door?" Jackie asked.   Cindy lowered her voice and answered, "I didn't have much time to look and it was pretty dark, but I saw alot of books (Rachel Scaduto) and kind of a bed area.  It almost looked as if someone was living in there!
"  "Who do you think it was that came in and went into the other part of the closet?" Jackie continued.  "I think," Cindy said slowly, "it was my Grandpa." (Leah Nasgowitz)  They were both puzzled. (Maria Brainerd)  "Do you think he lives in there?" asked Jackie. (Leah Nasgowitz)  "I thought your grandpa lived in the elderly home down the street!" she continued.  (Emma Malucha)  "Well, I should probably tell you something," Cindy stammered.   "My Grandpa," she continued, "he's, he's not really my Grandpa.  He's a very good friend of our family, and we've just always called him Grandpa."  "I don't really know where he lives," Cindy went on. 
    Jackie thought for a minute, then said "Why would you lie to me all this time?  I really thought he was your Grandpa." (Rachel Scaduto)  "Well, I've called him Grandpa for so long, I don't really even think about it anymore," Cindy answered.  "Well, OK, just one more question," Jackie continued.  "Why is he here and what do you think is going on?" (Rachel Scaduto) 
    Cindy took a deep breath and went on.   "Well, even though he is a good friend of our family, I don't really know that much about him."  "I do know that his name is Mr. Thompson and when he was a kid, he went to school here - maybe he learned of the secret room behind the closet back then." (Leah Nasgowitz)  "And I know that his wife passed away just a few years ago."  "I thought that he did live in the elderly home down the street, (Rachel Scaduto) but now I'm not so sure. . ." Cindy's voice trailed off. 
    "What do you mean?" Jackie persisted.  "I mean, maybe he is secretly living here," Cindy replied.  "But why would he do that?" continued Jackie.  "Are you thinking maybe he is lonely, or something?" (Leah Nasgowitz)  "No, I don't think it's that," Cindy answered.  "He'd actually have more people around him at the senior home than around here in the evenings and on weekends, so I don't think that's it."  "Well, what else are you thinking?" prodded Jackie.  "Well, I'm wondering if maybe he can't afford the rent at the senior home.  See, there's something else I never told you about him."  Cindy paused, then continued.  "He is a very nice man, I don't want you to get the wrong impression of him, but," her voice trailed off. 
    "But what?" Jackie asked excitedly.  "Well, I know that right before he got this job at the school, he had just gotten out of jail," Cindy explained.  "My parents don't think I know, but I saw some newspaper articles about him at the library."  "Do you know why he was in jail?" Jackie persisted.
    Cindy thought for a minute and answered, "if I can remember what the newspaper said, I think he got caught embezza. . ."  (Rachel Scaduto) Cindy trailed off.  "What was that?" Jackie asked?  "What's that word for stealing money from your company?" Cindy pondered.  "Oh, embezzling," Jackie added.  She continued, "Was he that poor that he needed to steal the money?"  "I remember the article talking about his wife dying in the hospital at that time, and that the medicines she needed were unbelievably expensive!" Cindy explained. 
    They heard a noise from down the hall, when Jackie said, "we really should get out of here and get home!"  The girls each went home but spent a good deal of time on the phone together that night. 
    The next day when they arrived at school there were new, colorful posters hung all throughout the halls announcing the final week of the writing contest.  "Wow, we've been so focused on the closet and everything that's been going on that I totally forgot about the contest," exclaimed Jackie.  "I better get back to my writing," she continued.
    "Are you still writing about the haunted closet?" asked Cindy.  "Well, yes," Jackie said.  "But, I have a different angle than when I started."  "I have quite a bit of research to do before I finish, so I better get going," Jackie added as she waved and wheeled herself down the hall.  "See you at lunch," she shouted from the end of the hallway.  Cindy wondered what Jackie would be writing about as she headed to her first class. 
    When Cindy saw Jackie at lunch, she was bent with her head over her paper as she wrote and wrote through the whole lunch hour.  "When can I read it," asked Cindy.  "When I'm finished, which won't be long," Jackie replied.  "Meet me back here after school and maybe I'll be done," she added.
    Cindy thought the afternoon seemed to drag on longer than usual.  She couldn't wait to read Jackie's story.  Jackie's Mom had told her once that Jackie was a very good writer, so she was anxious to see what she had written about the closet. 
    Finally the day was over and she went to the cafeteria to meet Jackie.  "Here you go," Jackie said as she handed her a neatly typed paper.  "How'd you get this typed up already?" Cindy questioned.  "It's only three pages and I had a study hall so I was able to go to the computer lab and type it," answered Jackie.
    "Secrets in the Closet," Cindy read out loud, looking at the paper.  "Wow, it sounds interesting," Cindy continued as she sat down to read.  She read about a man who loved his wife very much.  She read about their life and the fact that they spent 40 happy years together.  It was during this 40th year that the man learned with much dismay that his wife was dying of a terminal disease.  He spent every moment he could with her, trying to make her last months, weeks and days as happy and comfortable as he could.  And Cindy learned that just when the woman needed more expensive medications to make the pain bearable, the insurance would no longer cover the cost, so the man decided to steal some money to help him pay for the medicines.  Jackie wrote about how the man knew this wasn't right, but how he felt trapped because he couldn't bear to see the woman he loved suffer anymore, and he knew of no other way.  She wrote about how he realized his mistake, especially after his wife had passed away, and his emotions had time to simmer a bit.  He wanted to do what was right and pay for what he had done, so he turned himself in and spent a year of his life in jail.   Jackie went on to write about how this man got a job at a school when he got out of jail, where no one knew about his mistake.  She also wrote about how he didn't have enough money to live on his own anywhere, so without anyone knowing, he set up a makeshift bed in a hidden room at the school.  She finished her story with strong, true emotions about how anyone can make a mistake in life, and we need not be as quick to judge as we sometimes are.  She ended with the point, "What truly matters, is that a person feels sorry and takes whatever steps necessary to make up for their mistake."
    When Cindy was finished reading, she looked up at Jackie with a funny look on her face. (Leah Nasgowitz)  "Didn't you like it?" asked Jackie.  "Like it, I LOVE it!" exclaimed Cindy.  "I just never knew you were such a good writer.  You write with such emotion and raw feeling.  It makes the story just come alive - it's really good!" she finished.  "Let's hope the judges agree with you," Jackie replied with a smile.
    The judges did agree.  Not only did Jackie win first place in the contest with her story, but the next week when she came in to school, there was a flurry of activity and someone shouted "There she is -- that's Jackie Evans!"  Before she knew what was happening, a television newsperson walked up to her wheelchair, held a microphone up to her and asked, "Did you know the impact that your story would have on this community?"  Jackie sort of stammered a reply, "What impact?"  The newswoman smiled and continued, "Well, many people in this city were so touched by your story that they decided to do something to help Mr. Thompson.  They collected enough money to pay for his rent at the elderly home down the street for the next year!  By that time, he should be able to earn and save enough money to continue to pay for his own living expenses.  So he won't have to live and hide out in the closet here at the school any more!  You should be very proud of what you've done." 
    "Wow," Jackie exclaimed.  "I had no idea.  It just shows how much people really do want to help when they can."  Jackie spent the day in a fog as people asked her questions, congratulated her and told her how much they liked her story.  What meant the most to her was when Mr. Thompson approached her and said, "I can't thank you enough.  I was so ashamed of what I had done, and now people are telling me they understand. And I won't have to hide out in that closet anymore. . ."  Tears filled his eyes as his voice trailed off.  "Just know that I am very grateful!" he added. 
    At the end of the day, when Jackie met Cindy before they headed home she told her, "I'm really glad we moved here and I came to this school."  Cindy gave her a hug and responded, "I'm glad you moved here to!  And, I'm really glad we have no more secrets in the closet!"  They both laughed and headed out the door together.